中国学生最常用、最常错的10个连接词和表达
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雅思写作非常看重逻辑性,而这些逻辑性往往能够通过写作连接词来体现,然而连接词用不好照样拿不到高分,所以,今天给大家列出7大连接词,以及中国学生最常用也是最常错的10个连接词和表达,小伙伴们可要多多参考,避免重复犯错啦~~点击“阅读原文”有惊喜。
1、Cause and effect 因果关系
标志词
1)表示原因的 because, as, since, due to, owing to (画横线的连接词请重点掌握)
2)表示结果的 hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…)
E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment.
生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染。
2、Exemplification 举例关系
标志词 …is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As an illustration…(作为例证…)
e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films.
亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影。
3、Comparison and contrast 对比关系
标志词 While …,wheras…,whilst…,in contrast
e.g. wheras/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could often perform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)
现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务。
e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.
4、Concession 让步关系
标志词 Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词 名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管 ,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)
e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.
尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的。
2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.
死记硬背有时候是必要的,很枯燥和机械。
3 The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.
5、Definition 下定义关系
标志词 A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).
e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen
observations.
一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察。
Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals.
6、Supposition 假设论证
标志词 provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that…
e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued.
e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside.
7、Modification 修饰关系
标志词 that, which, who
In this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly like the buildings our ancestors built.
Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.
最常用错的10大连接词
错误1:on the other hand一般引导对比的东西,不等于besides, furthermore, secondly
例子:Many young people enjoy online shopping. on the one hand, it saves time. On the other hand, it saves money.
评讲:save time和save money 是两个并列的有点,没有对比的关系,最好用firstly, secondly。
错误2:on the contrary以为是In contrast的替换词
例子:The birth rate rose. On the contrary, the infant mortatality rate dropped.
评讲:on the contrary 一般出现的语境是前面出现否定信息。这个词组基本上不用于雅思作文。
错误3:while, wheras认为是in contrast的替换词
例子:The birth rate rose. While the infant mortatality rate dropped.
评讲:while 是从属连词,要连接两个独立的句子,这里应该是“,while”或者改成“in contrast”
错误4:besides, furthermore, what’s more, moreover, in addition被认为是“递进”的连接词
例子:Many people today choose to study in foreign countries. Besides, they can gain qualifications in foreign universities.
评讲:besides一般引导两个并列的观点,不指代因果关系,这里应该是“because of this”比较合理。很有意思的是,有一次我上课问学生什么是“递进”,举个中文的例子给我看,竟然没有学生能够举出恰当的中文例子。可见很多学生学习都是人云亦云,对一些概念其实根本不理解。
错误5:however被认为是on the other hand的同义词
例子:Working from home has benefited many people. However, it can cause problems.
评讲:however一般是转折关系,也就是后面的句子意思往往代表作者的首要立场。而on the other hand一般是并列关系,也就是前后句子或者观点没有轻重之分,是并列的,一般是两个事情的对比,而不是转折。
错误6:by doing this, in this way被认为是as a result, therefore, as a consequence 等
例子:Many people work long hours. By doing this, they may suffer poor health.
评讲:一般by doing this, in this way都是用在人们有计划地做某个事情,最后为了达到一定目的,或者效果。那么,显然不可能后面出现不好的结果,譬如说poor health。因此在这里用as a result最好。
错误7:as a result, therefore, thus, as a consequence 都是连接词,而不是连词
例子:many people today prefer to use mobile phones to communicate with their friends, as a result, the face-to-face contact declines.
评讲:as a result类似于副词,没有连词的功能,所以前面要用句号或者;号
错误8:thereby 不是therefore的替换词
例子:Many libraries have Internet connection now, thereby, people can do research online.
评讲:thereby的习惯用法是thereby+doing something, 不能违反这个规则,千万不要以为thereby 用了比therefore高大上
错误9:in order to 一般是表示有目的地去做某个事情,要注意逻辑主语,而且一般不会用否定
例子:Governments should not invest in the arts, in order to save money.
评讲:这个句子用否定读起来很不通顺,用governments should cut down on the spending on the arts, in order to save money.
错误10:with如果加名词,往往是表示“有了…”,后面一般不加负面的东西
例子:With pollution, many people will have health problems.
评讲:pollution是不好的东西,用with很怪异,用because of好一点